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Tuesday, February 28, 2017

Tweet Fiction: Cruising Cursed

     The sun was just peaking out behind a scattering of clouds that looked like the softest pillows that could ever be. A light blue sky stretched all the way to the horizon, providing the perfect backdrop for the scene. It was warm out, but not in a way that would cause one to sweat, and the heat was accompanied by an occasional cool breeze to keep the air from becoming too stagnant. The waters were calm, allowing the cruise ship to cut through the water easily, providing a smooth ride for the few hundred passengers aboard, each excited to finally be setting off. Add in to the fact that there isn't a single thing that I'm obligated to do and you've create the perfect environment for a vacation full of relaxation and recovery. 

     It would have been perfect my stomach wasn't constantly turning at the thought of what I needed to do today. I was cursed, you see. I did not immediately believe the old spinster of a woman, who apparently felt I was the worst human in existence for dropping a handful of change in what I thought was a beggar's cup. The splash and foul language that followed informed me that it was merely a cup of coffee. However, the misfortune that had come my way since then could not be explained away.

     I've lost my job, nearly lost my house and car, my wife is staying with her sister a few towns over all because I tried to help someone who I thought was in need and was mistaken. It just wasn't fair! I've always tried to do well by people. Offering to pay for drinks, holding doors if they're carrying heavy things, letting people merge, and offering those than less fortunate myself whatever pocket change I had. But one mistake and suddenly I deserve to have everything ripped from me?

     Karma is a bunch of bullshit if you ask me.

     When this old bitch cursed me, she said that the only way for the curse to be removed was for me to create misfortune greater than what I had encountered for another. A coldness spread through my veins as I recalled what needed to be done. I couldn't take this curse anymore. I've done so many good things and will continue to do them in the future. I deserve to be free!

     That thought repeated in his head as he began to make his way over to a group of his shipmates who had gathered against one of the lower railings near the front of the ship, all trying to get a good shot at the ancient ships that were lined up along the bay for some sort of show. 

      As I began to approach the crowd, my heart began to beat hard enough to hurt. It was punishing me for what I was planning. Knowing that I should be the one to bear this curse, not push it off to another. But no, I've already lost so much. So much that I didn't deserve to lose. There was so much good I've done, but everything was being taken away. It had to be done.

     There was cheering and excitement all around me, but all I felt as though I was surrounded by a cold air of dread. Once I was within reach of the group, I tripped. Well, that's what I wanted it to look like at least. In doing so I plowed into the outer line of the group, pushing them hard against those who were already leaning high up on the railing with cameras and selfie sticks in hand.

      I don't know what I expected to hear when someone went overboard, but it wasn't silence. I had stumbled away quickly to remove myself from the scene, so I didn't get a chance to see what my push caused, but silence was all I got in response. My heart stopped as I waited, hoping against hope that it would be that easy and I would be free.

     Then the screams started and I could feel a dense weight dissipate off of my body. The cold dread was gone, replaced by the amazing warmth of Miami. The tension and stress that had been building up for the past few weeks had all released at once, nearly causing me to crash to the floor in a puddle.

     I continued to walk away, using the panic as cover to remove myself from the scene completely. A smile slipped on my face, even though I felt a pain deep in my heart for what I had done. But now my vacation can finally begin. 




Flash Edit:  


   Blue skies, warm climate, and a cool breeze. Perfect for relaxing and letting all stress float away, but I could not relax. Not yet at least, because of the curse. I didn't believe it at first, but the number of unfortunate events I've encountered since could not be explained away. 

    A wave of dread passed over me, a reminder. To be free, I needed to pass it on to another. I needed to be free. That thought repeated in my mind as I made my way towards a group leaning high on the railings. 

    Accidents happen all the time, right?



Original Tweet:                (source)


    Free time and open skies for days, but he  could not relax. The curse needed to be passed on to another, and he knew what needed to be done.


Saturday, February 11, 2017

Tweet Fiction: Dreams For Sale


Author Note:
For this post and the next few after I will also be including a "Micro Fiction" version of the story that has a word constraint of 100. Just slightly above a tweet (~23-25 words) but still far more compact than the expanded section (500-5000). I hope you enjoy it and let me know how you like this format!
-Old Man Civil


Original Tweet:                (source)

What would you give to live out your dreams? $100? $1000? Your Life? Oh, but don't worry. They don't want all of it. That'd be such a waste.


Micro Fiction: (100 words)

    "Come one, come all! Gather 'round and listen up for the chance of a lifetime!" The tall man in the black and white suit called out to those milling about.

    "What're you willing to give up to live your dreams? Money? Possessions? Worry not. We don't desire either. We ask for one simple thing. Your life. Not all of it of course, don't be silly. With only the littlest bit we can help you live out your wildest dreams."The man opened his arms to the crowd with a grin across his painted face.

    "Who's ready to make a deal?"


Expanded: 


    "Come one, come all!" The almost absurdly tall man called out to the crowd milling about in front of him with a booming voice that could spread for miles. His suit striped black and white, patched up and threadbare from years of use and abuse. 

    "Come and listen for the chance of a lifetime!" He shouted, a small crowd finally beginning to form around his makeshift platform in the subway station. The man bent his unusually long legs, squatting down to be at eye-level to those who had gathered around. 

    The man gave the crowd time to settle, smiling at each person who continued to talk until they got quiet. Then once all was ready he began again, but this time in a hushed tone that could not be heard from outside of his little gathering.
    "What would you willing to give up to fulfill your wildest dreams? Those dreams you've had since you were a kid or the kind that you couldn't bring yourself to tell even your partner about. Your wealth? Your possessions? That seems like a reasonable price for such a thing, does it not?" 

    The man eyed each individual carefully, painted turning emotionless as a stone, as he said this. Their guilty and wanting souls his to be read like an open book set out just for him. 

    After a few uncomfortable moments, he sprang back up to his full height, towering over everyone around, with a showman's smile returned to his face.

    "Worry not, my dear friends! For we desire none of those things. What we are looking for is far more important than something that can be bought." The man continued, a wide grin spreading across his face that was painted to match his suit. 

    "What we ask for, my friends, is your life."  A silence spread across the group. Some unsure if they heard what he said correctly, others starting to wonder why they bothered stopping in the first place, but none of them moved. After letting the silence really sink in, letting the crowd fall deeper into thought as they tried to process his meaning, the man in the black and white suit laughed.

     "Not all of your life, of course! Don't give me such concerned looks! That would just be silly. After all, how could you live out your dreams if you are dead?" The man laughed again and this time some in the crowd laughed with him, although with a bit of some of the skepticism and nervousness remained.

    "With only the smallest, tiniest fraction of your life, we can help you. Yes, even you," the man said as he pointed out someone in the crowd who looked as though they were about to leave, but once the man had him in his gaze, they stopped and continued to listen. 

    "Even you can live out your wildest dreams. No matter how absurd, fantastical, or twisted." For a split second the man's demeanor changed, and several in the crowd flinched as though they had just been caught doing something they knew they shouldn't be. Then in a blink he was back as he was before, perhaps as he always was.  


    "Not a bad price if you ask me. You likely won't even notice it's missing! So what do we say, who wants to make a deal? I can see in your eyes that you're tempted, that if you say no now you'll regret it for as long as you can remember it." The man clapped his hands together, snapping the crowd out of their passive state, as if they had all be stuck in their own daydreams and fantasies. 

   "So who wants to make a deal with me? How about you?"